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#1 Ambrose

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Posted 14 February 2013 - 09:35 PM

Hello! There are times when I start to randomly sing a song in my mind. At times I can put the words down to paper, while most of the time all I can think of is usually the beat and myself looking like a fool when singing gibberish... But, this is the first of my latest songs that I could get some words down, but I'm struggling at the time. This particular post will be edited so that the new lyrics, once I think of them, are added. If you want to give any suggestions, that's up to you. If you do, thank you in advance.


Don't pretend that you know me,

My exterior is all that you can see,

The one day that you won't flee,

That's the time you'll discover the real me


You treat me like I'm nothing, nonexistent,

Like a ghost meant to roam the world, ignored,

But the truth is I am human, and I am persistent,

To prove that I can and I will be so much more


The storm has come, and you are here to stay

Enraged have I become, I will dare not sway

--- (This is where I started to struggle).



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Posted 27 February 2013 - 07:58 AM

great work keep adding to it u have some talent there
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#3 mosdata

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Posted 27 February 2013 - 01:28 PM

Those lyrics are really moving.

Do you write music to go with it?
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